The surface of
a cup of coffee is
the night sky
each bitty bubble
a creamy cluster
of stars
There is an
entire system
of stars
in my coffee cup!
I blow it around
the pressure of my breath
makes a
somewhat-black-hole
sending my bulbous stars
across a robust
and flavorful universe.
-Heidi Rose Krill
This is one of 25 poems I wrote for my second-quarter creative writing portfolio. I hope you like it.
*An original poem written while I was drinking coffee and watching **Julie&Julia
**A very good movie I do recommend to everyone. :)
7 comments:
Nice poem! Makes me want coffee.
Nice poem.. Love this line "There is an entire system of stars in my coffee cup!" I am looking forward to see this movie soon.
i am glad you liked my header. I made it just few days back...
cute poem!
we're also recommended to put written material in our portfolio. I only have one poem, though.
I'm a huuuuuuuge fan of Meryl & Amy. It's so great to finally have them act together!! I can't wait to watch it. (:
This is so great!
I adore Julie & Julia, btw!
Great poem! I really wanted to see that movie...
Wrote a review on that movie, I love it, too. :) Watched it again the other night. :D
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